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1 My pleas (poem) on Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:34 pm

My pleas


Too young to hear the fights between you two
Shattered glass breaking on the floor
or maybe a hand raised to put her in place
A child I was standing with my siblings
Confusion swirling not knowing what happened


I left with you as we ran from them
Living a year apart from my siblings
Memories from this time are hard
The year is like a waking storm
As I wait for it to calm the waves
I missed her so much
I loved you so much
I loved her so much


Thankful that my house was not a broken home
You could have stayed in my life more though
I promise you don't have to love mom
as she doesn't have to love you
Please hear my cries as I sit up in my bed
Know that when you let me go
You gave me a chance to learn


I wonder why you never heard my pleas
the screams so loud even overseas could be heard
Today, I had my first show on-stage
Nervous as my heart beats 1,000 times a minute
If only you were in the crowd to see my heart be put into something



Tell me just one thing, but please truthfully
Do you honestly miss me?
or Did you just give up on me?
Don't worry, I can fight my own battles now
I only need to stand strong for myself
Just remember, I still love you.


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2 Re: My pleas (poem) on Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:39 pm

I just read the whole poem. DINO
Good work Princezna, though I thought your poem sounded more like a song than a poem. Music
What rhyming pattern were you using? confused
Your poem is very deep, I like that. hamster
Great work! ThumbsUP


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3 Re: My pleas (poem) on Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:44 pm

Leo wrote:I just read the whole poem. DINO
Good work Princezna, though I thought your poem sounded more like a song than a poem. Music
What rhyming pattern were you using? confused
Your poem is very deep, I like that. hamster
Great work! ThumbsUP

I wrote it more for the fact if I want it in a song that I could :p

I can't remember...D: It might be freestyle or something I learned from 10th grade poem writing... this poem is really old though D: and I don't note my patterns which I probably should....

Thank you <3


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