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1 A poem I wrote. on Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:47 pm

Walk around like you own the place.
Maybe if you acted right, I would've stayed.
All you do is annoy me, give me some space!
Turned me into your own little maid!

I don't know why I stayed.
Today I'm climbing out this abyss
This is how I freaking get repaid?
And make sure I won't be missed.

I will never let you control me.
All I felt was helplessness.
Tonight I will be free.
But now I'm full of happiness.
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I don't know why I felt like making a poem. I was listening to some Eminiem music when I wrote this poem. It's not the best.



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2 Re: A poem I wrote. on Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:57 am

Obviously, Eminem inspired me to write poems.
Very good poem, I would like to see more of your poems Wink


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3 Re: A poem I wrote. on Thu Aug 09, 2012 12:41 am

I'm thinking of making one on how bogus people are.


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4 Re: A poem I wrote. on Thu Aug 09, 2012 12:04 pm

This poem is good. I like how it doesn't always rhyme, too many people think they have to :)

Good work, keep it up!

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